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Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-07-14 07:19:12 | older sister part 0ne | fair story.start of a series? spell check would help considerably,that kind of detered from the story for me. 6/10 thanx |
2007-07-14 11:40:23 | older sister part 0ne | She's too tall for the weight given. |
2007-07-14 12:01:26 | older sister part 0ne | it as ok.... needs spelling corrections and more detail..... 7 |
2007-07-14 15:23:26 | older sister part 0ne | too tall for the weight given????? lighten up! it's fiction oh and ''it as ok.... needs spelling corrections'' that's a joke dude, you fuckin hypocrite! good story dude, but seriously, spell check it and extend it and be a little more descriptive, the start of a good mini series 6/10 |
2007-07-14 17:23:12 | older sister part 0ne | 110 lbs with 36c's she must be tits and bones.......and learn to fucking spell |