2007-07-16 13:25:54 |
her best friend carolyn
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Thanks for the comments. this is my first story, but certanly not my last. I have already edited the story and will post it soon with more details, and maybe another one about what happens this weekend when her freind carolyn comes into town. |
2007-07-16 14:15:39 |
her best friend carolyn
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Oh god, im so fucking turned on right now, i need to fuck a girl so bad |
2007-07-22 00:08:05 |
her best friend carolyn
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Ok, I was breathless after reading this! Not only for the action which was good, but try some spacing next time, mix it up with some paragraph breaks. Makes the story easier to read... |
2007-07-27 06:45:05 |
her best friend carolyn
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Hi good story just going to read part 2 so will comment further then keep them coming |
2007-07-14 13:24:15 |
Camryn: C03
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Love the story, but that little sister is soooo annoying! hehe keep up the awesome work |