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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-22 11:59:25 | Pupil | As the last commenter said some of the details are iffy but it’s a story and I was entertained so I can’t fault you for that. To that last commenter: Yes there are girls that will suck your cock after it being in their ass. |
| 2007-07-22 12:51:14 | Pupil | needs a part 2 |
| 2007-07-22 13:52:21 | Pupil | thanks for the comments. Just a couple points. 1. it was just put out, so naturally there wouldn't be many comments. Thus, only 1 would tell me nothing. People can't comment before the story is posted. 2. The first thrust was slow. After that it was faster. You should read more carefully before you critique. 3. It was an alley, not a parking lot. Again, read more carefully. 4. Ass to mouth? Having experienced this in real life, I know it's not bullshit. In fact, you can look at AtM vids on xnxx. Thank you for your comments, but if you had someone read your comments before posting them on this website would entice more authors to listen to you. :) ~cheers. Morbid |
| 2007-07-22 14:10:10 | Pupil | wow that guy is an idiot... well i liked ur story there was a good introduction but it got into the fun part fast unlike other stories i have read lol if u wanna make a part 2 thatd be cool but it was pretty good anyways lol that guy doesnt pay attention at all does he.... |
| 2007-07-22 14:39:44 | Pupil | hmm the "?"s. They weren't in there when I typed this in MS word. Seem to be from when they [xnxx] turned it into html. I'm guessing those were spaces. Unfortunately once they publish I lose the ability to edit. I don't remember this being a problem in the past. I'll have to be more careful about extra spaces I guess. - Thanks for the comment. |