| 2007-07-25 23:26:14 |
the young girl down the road part 2
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You need better punctuation, capitalization... less run-ons... learn how to write... go back to high-school |
| 2007-07-26 16:22:15 |
the young girl down the road part 2
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wheres the 1st part ov this story |
| 2007-07-29 17:27:24 |
the young girl down the road part 2
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this was a fine story I enjoyed it. Disregard what other pessimistic readers say. |
| 2007-07-26 03:05:43 |
A Dream_(0)
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I loved it. Spectacular |
| 2007-07-27 15:28:54 |
A Dream_(0)
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terrible, didnt even read it. |