| 2007-07-28 02:44:44 |
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I agree, your fore play is excellent, describing the europe trip and Gears of War, i felt like I knew Steven, but your sex scenes are not quite up to par with the fore play, great work keep it up! part 2 please. 9 / 10 |
| 2007-07-28 15:03:38 |
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damn that shyt was awsome part 2 plz i gave that a 10/10 |
| 2007-07-29 02:33:38 |
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Awesome, your sex parts could be better though 10/10 |
| 2007-08-03 02:44:04 |
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dude the allie and me stories were fucking awesome and so is this 10/10 ur the best author |
| 2007-08-21 21:30:45 |
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This was definitely some good work since the Allie thing came to an end. Nice. |