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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-30 13:46:33 | Slutty Little Bekkie's Public Black Fuck | Well I guess this author has dropped off the edge of the Earth. Great story though, I just wish I knew what other "adventures" Little Bekkie has, will it continue???????? I hope like all it does . Theimp, don't keep us in suspense, please write some more!!!!! |
| 2007-07-31 14:34:44 | Stripper Gal | The story line is not bad but you rushed it too much, take your time, enjoy writing and nvision the events then write what you see. Leave an empty line between paragraphs for easier reading. |
| 2007-07-31 21:25:47 | Stripper Gal | to short, very rushed, savour the moment. |
| 2007-08-03 08:38:03 | Stripper Gal | learn to write and space |
| 2007-08-03 14:11:14 | Stripper Gal | u are one sick mother fucker, anybody that would do that should be hung by the balls and and then be butt fucked by a 10 in cock until you bleed to death |