| 2004-06-25 16:40:21 |
hot night Pt 1
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This is a good start, but needs more detail - description of yourself and your man, how you got into this situation, take it slower. But that said, a really good piece of erotica - I wish I was your man getting this treatment from you. I am now going to read part 2! |
| 2004-03-25 23:06:06 |
hot night pt. 2
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VERY GOOD keep it up |
| 2004-05-15 19:41:39 |
hot night pt. 2
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did you write it, stiffy ;) ? this is way too short |
| 2004-06-14 20:02:34 |
hot night pt. 2
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that was worse than the first one :-( |
| 2004-06-25 16:44:36 |
hot night pt. 2
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Again, too fast and too short but you have the right idea. Try reading my three stories and tell me if you like them. |