| 2007-08-13 21:04:57 |
Family Deception 1
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your story sucks like a hoover |
| 2007-08-14 00:44:00 |
Family Deception 1
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that was horrible, bad grammar, messed up details, and the story was kinda bad. rape isnt somthing easy to wright about and make it sound good. but incest rape always sucks. so sorry but you failed. 2/10 |
| 2007-08-14 02:01:37 |
Family Deception 1
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Grammar was so bad it make one want to quit reading it right away |
| 2007-08-14 16:06:50 |
Family Deception 1
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That was so bad I don.t think he could jack off right . |
| 2007-08-15 23:57:09 |
Family Deception 1
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I agree with the one reader especially with the first story. He turns her around and around and he don't know where the fuck she is. How is it possible that she is facing the tiled wall and him at the same time? |