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Date Story title Comment
2007-08-16 11:08:37 Camryn: C07 Now theres the ending we all wanted! :D 10/10 awesome
2007-08-16 18:07:26 Camryn: C07 aWESOME STORY!!!!!!
bEST ENDING!!!
1000/10
U A GOOD WRITER
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!1
2007-08-16 18:41:47 Camryn: C07 This isn't the end!!!
2007-08-16 23:32:45 Camryn: C07 BEST ENDING EVER!!!! lol
2007-08-17 01:00:43 Camryn: C07 Good chapter, although i still can't get over how badly you did the whole arm thing. There are many more realistic and/or more interesting ways to get a person in a hospital environment than the sad excuse you used. sorry.

p.s. how did the only moderate pain from an infected wound cause a complete body shutdown? Cutting off the pinky would add to the shutting down, not boost the body.
p.s.s. sorry to be so tough, but i do like the story.
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