| 2008-01-24 08:57:16 |
Camryn: C08
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That was unexpected. You should do this for a living. |
| 2007-08-20 14:43:23 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 4
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lol make him end up with his sister |
| 2007-08-20 19:07:09 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 4
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Your story is really kick ass man. The small details make the story end up being so much better. Even though you said the story was going downhill, I think it is still going really well. Even if you were to make a chapter 5 with college, it would be really cool just to see how all the relationship of your characters turn out. And I really like your writing! If you decide to end this here, I beg of you to please, please start another story. 50/10 man! |
| 2007-08-21 00:38:04 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 4
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I think he should somehow end up with Ashley and whats-her-face. That would be awesome. Fuckin awesome story. 100000/.0001 |
| 2007-08-21 01:15:24 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 4
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haha, 100000. Thats a pretty high score. But then again, i think it does deserve it. And i just read another story, Double Trouble, and even though it was good, Ide have to say that i enjoyed this series more. And i still think it should be continued. |