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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-24 07:23:55 | Teaching Me | cant wait for the next part, great story =] |
| 2007-08-24 10:03:36 | Teaching Me | wow. surprisingly good. keep it up. |
| 2007-08-27 08:01:44 | Teaching Me | I agree, this is the first I've ever read of a bitch dog being serviced by a guy. I've seen it done once when I was stationed overseas by accident. It's definately not the common place. Good story, well orchestrated. |
| 2007-08-29 10:09:17 | Teaching Me | Nice, but grammar needs work. 6/10 |
| 2007-08-30 16:26:51 | Teaching Me | You have a good imagination, but boy you’re spelling a grammar need a lot of work. Get spell check. Also if you write another wait a day after you write and re-read the story before you submit it. Use word and spell check then cut and past to this forum I gave you a 7/10 for story. It could get a lot higher with a little work. You might even re-write it. |