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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-04-04 08:18:46 | THE ELEVATOR_(3) | Fucking shite ive never read such immature non-imaginative bullshit |
| 2004-04-07 08:28:22 | THE ELEVATOR_(3) | I'll bet I could write better while in a sinking boat than that crap! |
| 2004-04-17 03:46:36 | THE ELEVATOR_(3) | Where was the rape?!? |
| 2004-04-26 18:50:17 | THE ELEVATOR_(3) | I didn't finish the story because of the poor grammar, you mixed up past and present, missed a lot of ed on the end of words and so on, But what I read was very promising otherwise, if you rewrite it checking the grammar, then please send me a mail and I will finish reading the story. :) |
| 2004-05-11 18:15:40 | THE ELEVATOR_(3) | READING THAT FUCKING SHIT WASTED MY TIME |