| 2007-09-13 20:33:04 |
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This story is weak. "I love you and I'm in love with you daddy"... thats one thing but when the father says the same thing back, thats just stupid. I'm getting sick of all these same stories over and over again, father and daughter falling in love with eachother, the daughter suddenly starts swearing a lot, and the dad doesn't mind. Get fucking real, why don't you people write a realistic story about incest for a change. I know that maybe some girls like their fathers to fuck them but how many of their fathers would let them go off swearing like they do? |
| 2007-09-13 21:16:34 |
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Your stories seem to shake people out of their trees. Every one of your stories I have read I have throughly enjoyed. keep up the good work!! |
| 2007-09-14 12:53:21 |
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For all these people who tell writers on this site that their shit sucks... AT LEAST THEY HAVE THE FUCKING GUTS TO POST THEIR WORK HERE... if it wasn't for them, these stories wouldn't be here dumb asses... Also, if you don't like a certain genre of writing, DON'T READ IT!!! that's why they have different genre's, so that you can read what YOU like and you don't have to read what you don't like... I agree with the guy on this comment page that said learn how to spell before you judge their work... Atleast they can write so you can read it... |
| 2007-09-16 16:15:50 |
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13 is not to young because i was fucking from i was 13 it depends on if ur ready enuf ta handle dick |
| 2007-09-19 01:39:03 |
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Hey you critics get a life if it bothers you smarten up and don't read it, I thought it was great and got a rel bonner |