| 2007-09-08 10:15:54 |
Jades mother day gift two
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WTF? Are we in a huge hurry or something? There was no build up as to who was who ........ This sucked! |
| 2007-09-08 18:16:59 |
Jades mother day gift two
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oi sorrry mate but try again way to unoranzied |
| 2007-09-09 08:36:22 |
Jades mother day gift two
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now it could be a a better story if you went a little slower with the story build up to it ~ and then you could try spacing things out ,, good story ,, bad writing style , try this story again but think about it before you pst it i give you a 2 |
| 2007-09-09 10:57:40 |
Jades mother day gift two
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what the fuck is this shit |
| 2007-09-08 12:50:14 |
Oops! I Fucked the Principal’s Wife Part 2
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not bad |