| 2007-11-05 03:54:11 |
Mother_(1)
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I think it's very funny when people say a Fiction story is Unbelieveable considering it's FICTION!!!STOP BEING DUMB ASSES!!!Writer, you did fine, keep it up. |
| 2007-11-13 05:34:23 |
Mother_(1)
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learn to spell asshole |
| 2007-12-11 18:35:49 |
Mother_(1)
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Good story but definitely not consistent enuff, short sentences woth little detail, then long with lots of detail come on sort it out. but overall i give it an 8/10 not a bad peice of work |
| 2008-01-08 01:12:55 |
Mother_(1)
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good story and beliveable |
| 2008-01-12 13:36:25 |
Mother_(1)
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arse |