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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-03-03 22:44:40 | My Summer Boss 5 | good story man slowed shit down, you make eve sound like a hermit depressant lol still good stuff man. |
| 2008-03-03 22:46:13 | My Summer Boss 5 | brook should get mor action |
| 2008-03-06 17:36:11 | My Summer Boss 5 | good story keep them cumming!! lol |
| 2008-03-06 20:16:59 | My Summer Boss 5 | it's kinda obvious where this is going right away but does anyone have any legitimate ideas of what i should have them do afterwards/in the future? |
| 2008-03-07 17:57:36 | My Summer Boss 5 | it was kind of slow, which was good, all good stories/erotica needs a good build-up, but I only came once while reading this, try making the whole story a tiny bit longer, but instead of adding more build-up and stuff, add a sex scene, a really good one, like, right in the middle of the story at some point |