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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-09-29 17:21:57 | Horny Devil | I really liked the storyline esp with the dad still alive but the mum and son doing it behind his back. I don't see anything wrong with your story just hope that it doesn't end with just this story. Write more. |
2007-09-30 03:13:34 | Horny Devil | Let me quote this story "his moms tight cunt rubbing againest his cock sent some horny feeling through him.... mmmm Cried Sarah her body was awash with horny feelings," Use some FUCKING OTHER ADJ's!!! "horny feelings?" GOD YOU WRITE LIKE YOUR A FIRST GRADER... |
2007-10-01 20:02:10 | Horny Devil | To the reader who accused this story writer of probably having "flunked grammer," listen, you brain surgeon. It's grammar with an "a," not grammer. If you criticize you must make sure you're right and correct. Right about now you look like a dumb-ass. |
2007-10-02 22:44:58 | Horny Devil | it made me horny. who care about run on sentences? |
2007-10-03 17:21:16 | Horny Devil | great story |