| 2005-06-10 23:47:13 |
Alexis and her teacher
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hmm... Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Domination/submission, Prostitution, BDSM, Enema ... thats what ur stories supposed to be about... pretty much none of that happened... did you start masturbating while u were writing it and forgot about it or what? |
| 2005-06-26 01:46:37 |
Alexis and her teacher
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this story sucked....nothing. it was a good plot, but u fucked it up when u didnt even finish it. i swear if i read another story like this one.... |
| 2005-07-12 20:42:02 |
Alexis and her teacher
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dude.. wtf, you can't even spell right and you kept missing out words. What a shit story,,, grow some balls you bitch |
| 2005-08-01 19:02:35 |
Alexis and her teacher
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WOW........I scrolled down before I read this and saw that you had 148 comments and was very impressed. Since it seemed you had so many comments I decided to read your story plus I knew it was short so it wouldnt take very long. I read it and I have to say hun, you CANNOT WRITE WORTH SHIT!!!! I know I am not a writer but babe--at least I dont post stories like that just to piss people off. I thought Gaylord's comment was HILARIOUS and I had a better time reading most of your comments than I did your story. IF YOU ARE LIKE ME AND LOOK AT COMMENTS READ SOME OF THESE THEY ARE VERY FUNNY!!! |
| 2005-08-11 13:52:02 |
Alexis and her teacher
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no wonder its on the most read list..it's so popular that you got so many comments...AHAHAHA...the beach incident was already lame.... |