| 2007-10-24 16:58:56 |
My summer boss
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that waz great |
| 2007-10-24 19:45:01 |
My summer boss
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It was good so I think you should continue writing both this and the my sister ashley chapers, you are a god. |
| 2007-10-25 04:19:27 |
My summer boss
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I thought the build-up was too long and a little drawn out, but a pretty good story overall. |
| 2007-10-25 09:10:14 |
My summer boss
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wow!!!! this is a great story.... |
| 2007-10-25 15:17:26 |
My summer boss
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definetly a good story. i have to agree the build up was a little long and the kid was way to naive for my taste but it was well writen. you have the potental to become a great auther please write more for this storyi want to see more sex nextime |