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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-19 02:14:28 | My summer boss | Charming. absolutely charming. Don't underestimate the naievete of a semi-sheltered high school graduate without any hope or expectation of scoring with a 30-year-old bombshell like Eve. you did a wonderful job building characters and a relationship, qualities sorely lacking in most stories on this site. On his first time, he really should have blown his wad in about thirty seconds, and you should have added the second round of sex that afternoon. The berevity of the actual sex act was fitting, but some more follow up would have been nice. Overall, excellent story. =dreamer= |
| 2007-10-19 11:40:49 | My summer boss | great story..only problem that i've noticed with this story is that the sex scene wasn't on par with the story as a whole. Story line and build up is masterfully done but sex scene isn't as expressive as the rest of the work. Again great story |
| 2007-10-19 21:49:43 | My summer boss | Way too long of an intro. Good story, but the first third or so could have been cut out. It took too much time to get to the good part. |
| 2007-10-19 22:36:35 | My summer boss | I like how the idiot below (posted at 21:49) would rather have the story dramatically cut in half and reduced in quality rather then just scrolling down so he can get a "quick fix." If you can't understand and appreciate a story and are only looking for a "quick fix" go jack off to images, you're wasting too much precious time reading things to begin with. |
| 2007-10-19 23:24:03 | My summer boss | That only goes to show that retards, like him, undoubtedly have short attention spans. how about i suggest you reading "three little pigs" first before advancing on to read adult material? |