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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2007-10-20 13:50:25 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 2 | Again, proofread. Not only does your grammar need a little work, there are whole words missing from sentences. It's obvious, from context, what you're trying to say, but... Anyway, both chapters so far are highly arousing, but also highly fake. As already mentioned, not even Superman can actually cum that much in such a short time. Also, I don't care how comfortable they are with you, no woman I've ever heard of will let you see them douche themselves. Although, overall, the storyline is good. I look forward to seeing more, but hope they're better written. 7/10 |
| 2007-10-20 16:04:28 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 2 | liked both stories , now would like to see aunt blackmail mom & son. |
| 2007-10-20 18:57:45 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 2 | very sexy love it 8/10 |
| 2007-10-20 19:19:51 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 2 | Well from all those who say this story is fake, well that is your opinion. A lot of my stories are fake, but I base some of them from real names and occurances, and make a new fantasy sex story with it. But Bed Making Mom is real, cause it did happen. And for those who say a nine inch dick is not real, I pity you. For that is my real size as nine inches is pretty common. 6 to 8 is averageIf I was to have said 10 to 12 inches then I can understand your disabliefs, though I have seen a couple that size from my time as working as a Jailer when I had to strip search male inmates, and believe me, black guys really put me to shame, And to this day My mom and I still have our little fun time, which I am also happy to say that I am married to Ashley who was mentioned in my story. Oh and it |
| 2007-10-20 19:24:23 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 2 | Oh and it wasn't 14 orgasms, it was one orgasm in the first story though I had come close several times, and 7 times in the second story, totaling 8 times, which can happen, but it leaves you very exhausted. In my earlier days I could have quite a few orgasm, though near the last one very little comes out. I am lucky now to reach two in a day, though a few days I did 3. I had the next few chapters done and ready to post, and I was soon going to add in my proposal to Ashley as my next chapter skipped several months at time since I felt day to day would take too long. But since all the negative reviews that I received, these stories will now just be stored in my harddrive to stay. As well I had three new stories to started as well, titles "At The Pool", "Best Friends" and my favorite so |