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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-22 18:05:25 | Heroes - Untold Chapters - Ch .1 | hmm.... well at least it wasn't very long, because that was a hot idea, but a shitty presentation. just work on your story line, and try to describe actual detail, not the events, just the detail. |
| 2008-02-07 01:27:38 | Heroes - Untold Chapters - Ch .1 | it's a good idea bob, might help if you lengthened it a bit :) congratulations on your originality! |
| 2007-10-20 16:51:45 | More Fun With Jenny | what a load of shit you illiterate tosser |
| 2007-10-21 14:10:20 | More Fun With Jenny | Reader 10-20-07 - 16:51 you said its a load of shit I agree but such awesome shit I came twice while reading it |
| 2007-11-12 03:04:39 | More Fun With Jenny | hi |