| 2007-11-02 10:51:42 |
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I agree that this is a good and mostly well written story, but several other readers caught the same thing I did. First she was 'Carrie' then, just a paragraph later, she was 'Callie'. It is always a good idea to re-read your work often to avoid simple mistakes like this one. Still, nice work. 8/10 |
| 2007-11-03 09:48:57 |
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hmmmmm baby dis story made me finger my hot wet pussy to orgasm |
| 2007-11-03 19:05:37 |
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yeah rednecks arent hot just stupid shits |
| 2007-11-04 13:59:56 |
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hillbilly girls ar hot, horny, and healthily happy |
| 2007-11-06 11:22:17 |
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Hot, hillbilly pussy!! what could be better? |