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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-03 14:54:49 | Ten Peckered Toad | fbailey, some of these comments (the strange person who doesn't like your stories) are pathetic. Your story lines and details are always great, I think I prefer your writing over my own fantasies. Keep up the work. |
| 2007-11-04 12:06:56 | Ten Peckered Toad | I will have to argue with most peoples comments. I normally am unsatisfied with your stories. Before anyone gets mad let me explain. Your stories are usually off the wall (2 cocks), or are so unlikely to happen that its hard to get involved with them. There have been some that I have enjoyed, can't remember them off the top of my head. Constructive criticism..... Try to put more details, make them a little longer, and spend some time refining them. You definitely are a good writer, I just personally find it hard to believe your stories could ever happen. |
| 2007-11-04 12:36:44 | Ten Peckered Toad | previous reader, in case you didn't notice, this story is marked fantasy. off the wall stuff is expected. great story. could use a little more detail and length in the sex scenes. |
| 2007-11-04 19:56:22 | Ten Peckered Toad | this is stupid! what were you thinking???? wait - you weren't thinking were you? |
| 2007-11-04 23:29:23 | Ten Peckered Toad | Obviously you cannot please everyone with the same story. I am sure that some people in this world do not like the Harry Potter series either. |