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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-06 14:40:42 | Mom A Whore | I've read some of your stories and i'd rate them 5-8 though rarely higher than a 7. They need a better story line, more detail and for the love of God stop using exclamation marks all the fucking time. It ruins it by making it seem like everyone's yelling. Make some more brother/sister things as well. The parent/child thing gets a little old. |
| 2007-11-06 15:31:29 | Mom A Whore | Simply sated I put exclamation marks at the end of sentences that are only inside the quotation marks. However spell check seems to require them at the end of one-word sentences like Wow! If I wrote a bunch of brother/sister stories I would get complaints about that too. All I can do is apologize but I shouldn’t have to. However I have started turning off the comments again. I am a firm believer that the number of readers and the rating pretty much say it all. There is no way to please every reader with every story. So fell free not to read them. As I keep stating I write for my own benefit. I only post my stories to repay this site for all of the good stories that I have read here. I believe that if other writers would submit more stories you the reader would have a better selection to choose from. Or better yet you could take all of your absolutely wonderful ideas and write a story of your own. |
| 2007-11-08 06:52:57 | Mom A Whore | You say you write these stories for your own benefit? What benefit???? You do very well mostly, but please don't rely on Spell-Check to help you with your writing. If you know the English language and proper grammar you don't need Spell-Check. I'm a newspaper writer, an English major when I was in college, and find that spell-check is not needed. |
| 2007-11-08 10:20:53 | Mom A Whore | What is my benefit? Well it keeps me sexually stimulated. I hate to say it but sometimes I need the mental stimulation to make love to the same woman for over 38 years. Letting my mind wonder allows me to achieve a better climax too. Plus writing sexy stories has become a hobby for me over many years. As to spell-check. Unlike you I am not a newspaper writer or an English major. In fact you may be the only such person in this site. Congratulations! I truly need the help that spell-check provides. Thank you for your comment. |
| 2007-11-08 17:08:26 | Mom A Whore | Thank you, right back Fbailey. By the way, I've been married for 45 years and, yes, sometimes one needs stimulation to continue on. (the newspaper writer) |