| 2007-11-29 14:52:12 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2
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If you watch the show you can actually see that the kids to act and talk this way so its really awesome to read this fanfic, Bravo 10/10 |
| 2007-11-29 16:51:44 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2
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lol too long its a bit short... but its still good 9/10 |
| 2007-12-02 23:39:38 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2
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more detail. i like it. go farther in the pregnancy |
| 2007-12-09 13:36:45 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2
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It's not really sick, because yes they are childen, but it's a cartoon. Plus it's all fiction. |
| 2007-12-10 15:58:26 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2
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Nice try, not perfect toward the cartoon carracters, but okay in my standards man. |