| 2007-11-26 15:26:58 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 8
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dude these stories have been great from the begginnings!! i just rather like the consensual sex rather than the gothic crap with natalia and tish, they should explode. But keep it coming, this one was pretty good from start to finish.... |
| 2007-11-26 18:19:43 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 8
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i thought it to be good, yes not as good as your others, but build off the shite and get back to the good stuff. keep it up, i'm hooked on your stories. |
| 2007-11-26 20:06:22 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 8
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dude ... this is going great ... excellent round again ... can you please bring tish into action again with the next part ? that would be nice ! |
| 2007-11-26 22:47:34 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 8
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absolutely horrible ending, as i'm sure you know. Man, yah gotta stay strong and not push this crappy ending stuff out. Oriana is my fav. char and you just set her up to literally be raped by Ashley when a much better scene could have been made with Tim. Try to keep up the good work and get rid of the bad, not that Nat. and Sasha were bad. They should have only been in the story for a little while, like a chapter or two, not drag it out so much. Get back to the Ashley and Oriana, it really never gets old |
| 2007-11-27 00:19:13 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 8
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mmmmmm, i think oraina deserves to be raped just a little |