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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-10-03 21:05:54 | My Cousin Nikko | some of the worst spelling ever |
| 2005-04-20 10:55:15 | My Cousin Nikko | Tori you should put a blank line after each paragraph ... that will make it easier to read... Also don't rush things ... give more detailed descriptions ... 6/10 |
| 2006-10-07 04:54:54 | My Cousin Nikko | so continue, please go on with your deflowering you need to tell all of us about it. May I have the pleasure of gtting your ass cherry, please. I'll be gentle, just look at my eyes, I never lie to a little girl |
| 2004-04-20 10:45:30 | Dream Lovers pt. 1 | Boring. Keep your day job. Stem?? Cute. Take a writing class. You're damaging the image of the brotherhood, wimp. |
| 2004-09-20 15:26:06 | Dream Lovers pt. 1 | too much symbolisim, was he having sex or picking flowers? |