| 2008-04-18 18:26:39 |
Jayna the Genie
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EPIC STORY OMG IT WAS WIN |
| 2008-04-21 12:28:27 |
Jayna the Genie
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U are one talented writer. keep it up please! id love to see a sequal. |
| 2007-12-04 12:35:20 |
Just Cause, part 1 of 2
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good story, but very badly written 6/10 |
| 2007-12-13 15:20:36 |
Just Cause, part 1 of 2
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lol u nub, anal sex wasnt evn invent yet! |
| 2007-12-24 09:29:01 |
Just Cause, part 1 of 2
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I think you'll find that anal sex has been around for eons -- it's just become more popular of late. Good story, but you have some tense issues. Stick to either past or present. Hey, but it made me cum a couple of times. Keep writing. |