| 2007-12-05 01:51:02 |
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fuck here in the arse and fist fuck her as well |
| 2007-12-06 03:08:55 |
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IT Was Gr8 ..
I Liked it Very Much ..
My Clit is Soaking Wet.. |
| 2007-12-06 07:50:54 |
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ending was a bit of a let down, the whole story built the arousal and then it was this short 1 paragraph bit. Make a longer, drawn out ending next time |
| 2007-12-06 16:26:01 |
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i agree with the guy below me all the supsense built up a short fuck but nice build up 7/10 |
| 2007-12-07 16:32:52 |
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Many grammatical mistakes and misspelled words. If a writer cannot properly prood his work, then he MUST find someone to do it for him. Poor grammar and misspelled words either show a lack of attention to detail or a lack of writing ability. It also indicates that he has very little pride in his work. |