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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-23 21:14:19 | T or D part 3 | i'm not thrilled with this installment but Please don't let that discourage you from writting more, you can take this to some very intresting places...keep up the good work and talent that you showed in parts 1 and 2 |
| 2007-12-18 15:57:24 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 3 | LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-12-18 19:21:19 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 3 | What the fuck is this, are you kidding me???? Do you actually watch this dumb ass show> What the fuck is up with an old grandpa fucking his granddaughter?!?! That's just WRONG AND DISGUSTING. There's WAY too much talking during sex, add more detail and less talking |
| 2007-12-18 21:21:30 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 3 | i loved it the grand daughter was kinda young to be double dipped but as a story as a whole it was very good |
| 2007-12-18 23:20:14 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 3 | The first 2 stories were absolutely great and u deserve praise for a job well done on them... But this didnt reach its potential. Try focusing more on Ben and Gwen, its akward when theres sex between two people with an age difference of 50+ years so minimalize the grandfather's role I appologize if my comment offends u as a writer |