| 2007-06-21 07:20:32 |
my daughter_(2)
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA WTF?! THIS IS UTTER SHIT! MY DOG CAN WRITE BETTER STORIES..DUMB PUSSY |
| 2007-07-08 20:43:40 |
my daughter_(2)
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was ok not the best would like to see u wright more 8/10 |
| 2007-07-14 21:22:43 |
my daughter_(2)
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This shit must have been written by a middle school dropout! |
| 2007-10-24 18:46:12 |
my daughter_(2)
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I enjoyed the story the paragraphs could have been a little shorter. Are there really people who come on theses sites just to moan, seems that way ignore them and keep writing. |
| 2007-12-03 15:45:15 |
my daughter_(2)
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A GOOD START~ MORE?? |