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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-14 10:23:22 | the blow job babysitter | need to dovelop it more you got the outlines of the story now put in the detals to turn it from a six to a ten but good start and keep working at it 6/10 |
| 2008-01-14 13:12:17 | the blow job babysitter | i think you should let him fuck you |
| 2008-01-14 17:07:09 | the blow job babysitter | nice story, need some work as 01-14-08 10:23 says but I think it is a 7/10 |
| 2008-01-14 17:23:26 | the blow job babysitter | a lot of sentences had strange wording that was hard to understand. a lot of typos as well. Simply reading your writing a couple of times would help you to correct these errors. |
| 2008-01-14 19:10:38 | the blow job babysitter | Oh Honey let him fuck you really hard and shoot a big load up yoyr cunt |