| 2008-01-07 12:34:06 |
TTIDFMBAWGN
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This a Total waist of my time, It's stupid. plz don't tri this another story - - - > True or False. Don't writs again........... |
| 2008-01-07 16:44:00 |
TTIDFMBAWGN
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ok for the asswholes here who dont know how ot think outside the box and just want a horrible fuck story, fuck you. This was an interesting and unique way of writing that ive never seen before, 9/10 |
| 2008-01-08 15:58:10 |
TTIDFMBAWGN
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What ahell of away to write a story I tried and gave up the shits |
| 2008-01-12 16:53:20 |
TTIDFMBAWGN
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what a fuckin´shit . even a zero is too much |
| 2008-01-15 14:19:20 |
TTIDFMBAWGN
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Formated as a play. The story was intresting. More thought had to go into the reading of it. The imagry was there! Dropping the "says" and space between the lines may help clarification, maybe. I was going to say"with work this could be very good"; but it is good. You have put work into it. Maybe this is not the site for this format. If you find one that is kinder, i hope I find it to. |