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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-12-26 06:28:41 | Gertie's Cream Pie Christmas | Absurd. I laughed, I cried, I was flacid and googled. |
2008-01-01 18:54:46 | Gertie's Cream Pie Christmas | ur a fail at life. I didn't know google needed to be installed |
2008-01-05 01:29:31 | Gertie's Cream Pie Christmas | fuck me |
2008-01-11 13:27:56 | Gertie's Cream Pie Christmas | Science... and sex... They don't mix. |
2008-02-12 12:38:21 | Gertie's Cream Pie Christmas | It was good, but could use some polish. I was disappointed you didn't work "taint" in as you described her perineum (e.g. "...the space between the anus and the vagina, commonly know as the taint.") Additionally, you spent all that time on the use of gastro-intestinal pressure to force the seminal fluid out of the rectal cavity thru the anal orifice without working in any references to felching . I felt this was a missed opportunity. I do, however, feel you show some rough-cut potential. Keep trying. |