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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-04 02:30:55 | My "BIG" Secret | “Fuck yeah!” I shouted as I started to climax. I lol'd |
| 2008-01-04 07:17:55 | My "BIG" Secret | For those who think I placed too much attention to his cock sized well too bad! That is what the story was all about his 'big' secret! |
| 2008-01-04 09:20:47 | My "BIG" Secret | I must agree with the people commenting about spelling and grammar. The errors do make it harder to read smoothly. As I tried to decipher what you were meaning to say, my cock deflated, much like thinking about my ex-wife. However, taking these errors out of the story, it is an excellent beginning. Keep working and write more. One suggestion I would give you is to use a word processing program like Microsoft Word to check your spelling and grammar, then cut and paste to this forum, |
| 2008-01-05 02:02:11 | My "BIG" Secret | Its got potential, you just need to be more careful before you press the submit button. Write it first in Word (or similar) then after you do all the spell/grammer check stuff . . . READ IT. Then read it again, then forget about it for a day or two. Then read it again. XNXX gets the stories out about once a week so there is no need to rush. Keep writing! |
| 2008-01-07 01:58:03 | My "BIG" Secret | What a surprise, a shy nerd manages to fuck the hottest, most popular girl in school. Sigh, I need something new! |