| 2005-05-23 02:27:17 |
Autumn pt. 3
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Wow. Hats off. That's some dark fiction. You should be given a trophy.... and subsequently be beaten to death with it (or at least sodomized with it). I didn't check to see if part four is posted yet, but the reader deffinently deserves a taste of revenge... I would agree with some other comments that this is where the story eventually needs to go. Perhaps she could come up with some even MORE FUCKED UP THINGS to do to her father.... ie. funneling drain-opener into his ass etc. Just a thought. I'll give you a ten just for audacity alone. Great work... you sick cunt. |