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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-27 16:15:03 | Poetic Memories | You have to put in spaces ust like you have to take breaths |
| 2008-01-27 18:03:46 | Poetic Memories | Create some paragraphs so it's more readable! |
| 2008-01-28 15:06:33 | Poetic Memories | It was different and kind if sweet. Paragraphs and spaces would probably give your readers the chance to enjoy it more and give you a better rating. 10/10 |
| 2008-01-29 17:22:03 | Poetic Memories | @ words! paragraphs nad proofread |
| 2008-02-13 01:33:47 | Poetic Memories | A potentially good story and the writer has a decent vocabulary. The problem is that the piece obviously wasn't proof read for correct wording, spelling or punctuation. In fact, I just stopped reading.... came here to make my comments and rate it 4, (when it might well have been an 8 or 9, if I'd been able to finish it) Try again.. and next time don't be in a rush to post it. Let it sit a day and then go back to readand proof what you wrote. |