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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-29 23:05:59 | a cherry for her brother | nice story man i loved it. write more asap. |
| 2008-01-30 14:13:01 | a cherry for her brother | Learn to spell. Quite not quiet. |
| 2008-01-30 16:19:06 | a cherry for her brother | Wish I had a 12 yr old sis to fuck. Great. I presume there's more. |
| 2008-02-01 02:28:31 | a cherry for her brother | hey it was great |
| 2008-02-01 19:56:33 | a cherry for her brother | great story line and plot, but your spelling needs a lil' work. Also it'd be nice to see some more characteristics about the characters in there too, and a little more explanation about the situations and the moments would help the story flow more smoothly. Keep writing 8/10 |