| 2008-02-20 23:08:12 |
Dreamers
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yay! thanks. And i'm sorry it ends kinda quick, i didn't rly know where to go next! |
| 2008-02-21 23:39:00 |
Dreamers
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very very very sexy story. i liked it a lot, and you should write a sequel. Maybe have Claudia come back, and you guys do it for real? There was just one problem that i saw, In the 6th paragraph, it says "Sarah was forced to move back", shouldn't it be Claudia? |
| 2008-02-05 16:32:11 |
Ben 10 and the new alien chapter 5
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....not enough sex scenes |
| 2008-02-05 18:45:23 |
Ben 10 and the new alien chapter 5
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theres only one, and its a solo, needed another..or 2...or 3... |
| 2008-02-05 21:56:42 |
Ben 10 and the new alien chapter 5
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sex? this is a sex story right? there's almost no sex described in this version. even if it is a series, every part should have a decent amount of sex in it. |