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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-02-22 19:12:17 | My sister Ashley chapter 9 | You are def an excellent writer; there is no doubt about it. This story, overall, wasn’t as good as the previous ones. But that’s to be expected, if the writer doesn’t have passion or doesn’t enjoy what he is writing, the readers won’t enjoy the story as much either. But in general these stories are still far better then most of the stuff on here. I think the MSB series is amazing and I love the characters from that series. I hope you will find the passion again with MSA for the final chapter, so it can end just as amazingly as it started. This chapter wasn’t as nice but it seems, by the way you ended it, you are going back to the roots of the story which I think is great. I like when Ashley and Tim get along. I actually like Ashley more then Oriana. So I will be anxiously waiting for the |
| 2008-02-22 20:09:47 | My sister Ashley chapter 9 | Awesome im glad to see Ashley and Tim getting close again. I like it better when they are happy and doing it with each other...not when they are dicks to each other. But anyways im looking forward to the final chapter! |
| 2008-02-23 00:55:12 | My sister Ashley chapter 9 | in all honesty von your a artist and its a damn shame u lost the passion for msa, and i feel a void inside me and sadness because of this loss of one greatest series i've ever seen. i wish you would continue but i will respect your wishes in hope that one day ...... there will be a return of msa |
| 2008-02-23 01:02:28 | My sister Ashley chapter 9 | now i jus hope that u give a LONG ending that will tie up some ends, but leave others to the imagination bring some old characters back like sara. i just think it might be interesting i am gonna miss msa deeply and ill say it again i hope that one day your passion will return. but i still look forward to your magnificent stories |
| 2008-02-23 18:23:04 | My sister Ashley chapter 9 | My feelings are the same as Pwny's. You are one of the best writers on this site and im gona miss this serie deeply. I have no idea what im gona do untill you finish with the tenth one. I was lucky to have found this serie after you were done with all nine. Im gona check out msb but if you ever deside to publish this serie and a short story (wich i hope you will) ill be one of the first in line to buy it |