| 2008-03-01 16:14:04 |
Ashlee
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Thank you, I will put more plot and try to make it less monotonous next time. |
| 2008-03-02 05:34:24 |
Ashlee
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d startin was good..but den i was little bored when it was coming 2 the end...but it was ok..5/10 |
| 2008-03-02 23:34:50 |
Ashlee
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too fast to start the sex. give it more of a back storie |
| 2008-03-03 18:29:11 |
Ashlee
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i relle liked it till the end |
| 2008-03-01 00:26:17 |
Just to see you
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pretty good, would have been better if he pleased her a bit more, going down on her and lots of description.. but im wet so thats a good sign =P |