| 2008-03-11 22:11:53 |
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This story isnt headed for necro. Its an actual series and there are 2 other chapters to it. I dont mind necro, though, and dont see why anyone else should. A story is a story. It's fiction. I dont really care so much about my ratings. I would like to have a good rating, but I realize sometimes your best work is just going to be misunderstood so why get hung up on numbers? |
| 2008-03-12 14:49:13 |
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Damn good. I want to hear about the next time he meets her. Perhaps he should being along a few buddies and really tear that ass up. |
| 2008-03-12 22:15:34 |
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you'd be much better w/o rape but great writing style anyway |
| 2008-03-13 11:19:28 |
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Nice stor. I agree stay away from necro and in my opinion scatology |
| 2008-03-10 21:01:34 |
Winter of '78
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read better stuff in womens weekly |