| 2008-03-17 17:47:50 |
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Too many characters for too few sentences. But...if you must continue.....let's develop a tangible plot...and I hope you have something more than the boring "Experiencing sex from the other gender" in mind. |
| 2008-03-17 20:26:15 |
DNA Chapter 6
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i love these stories but i`m getting comfused. perhaps a summary including character`s names and thier relevance to the story would be a good idea, if it does not hinder the production speed of future chapters of course. thank you for a fantastic story so far! skunky x |
| 2008-03-17 21:23:59 |
DNA Chapter 6
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we need more sex just like the others |
| 2008-03-18 21:39:59 |
DNA Chapter 6
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i realy like the story plot, but they seam to jump around a lot, and more sex is needed, or cross over sex like they are getting lind up would be nice |
| 2008-03-18 01:22:52 |
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Ten out of ten.Spot on |