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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-03-22 03:07:15 | My Brother and Me_(6) | I'd been fucking my sister for almost two years before she had her first orgasm. It was the day after her ninth birthday. I was fourteen. Afterward, she said "I wish you'd made me cum on my birthday." I promised to make her cum on her next one... and did. Of course she'd had over a hundred, by then. |
| 2008-03-22 14:14:24 | My Brother and Me_(6) | my sister went mad at me when i shot my load into her after i promised to pull out |
| 2008-03-22 20:24:41 | My Brother and Me_(6) | Nice story, use spell check and re-read your story a couple of days after you write before posting. Forget the English majors below. |
| 2008-03-22 21:42:10 | My Brother and Me_(6) | Great story - very poorly written. Try harder next time. |
| 2008-03-22 23:29:34 | My Brother and Me_(6) | Good story, but i so many others you don't proof read nor do you bother with spell check.You have a tendancy to leave off letters in words, generally a small word.When you leave outwords, again small words, the reader has stop and try to figure out what you said. That breaks the flow of the story |