| 2008-03-28 20:50:04 |
A happy family of INDIA
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Forget the racial remarks, yes the English was not that good nor the phraseology but I like the story content. Keep trying. 6/10 |
| 2008-03-28 21:55:41 |
A happy family of INDIA
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you've got to be kidding man ! Is india really this fucked up for you to write such a twisted story as this ? i'm shocked ! |
| 2008-03-28 22:23:40 |
A happy family of INDIA
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You're asshole! It's bad, the story is fucking bad! You're fucked shit hindu! Eat beef, indian! |
| 2008-03-29 08:13:55 |
A happy family of INDIA
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Good one.... needs improvement but good potential |
| 2008-03-30 06:54:28 |
A happy family of INDIA
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fuk mothers their wabt it secretely my mom eats my cock wvery nite we live togwther an hav a baby nd m amuslim mohamed is my name |