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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-10-03 21:37:33 | holiday fun | ok short bt to the point im hung more than him 13.5and white |
| 2004-10-09 01:23:59 | holiday fun | I love the big age gap. Older guys doing teens is so hot. Too short , but still good. do more |
| 2005-06-06 00:03:41 | holiday fun | i think im a little late... |
| 2005-06-23 00:34:03 | holiday fun | good job, it got me wet but it wasn't enought to finish the job, keep writing |
| 2006-09-30 19:53:38 | holiday fun | Michelle: Your story wasn’t bad and was reasonably original. However there are a few things you really need to know. “Boyfriend” not “Boyfreind”. You have the “ie” as “ei”. Put in some spaces between your sentences. Watch your spelling and grammar. You say it is a “True Story, Interracial, Older Male / Female, First Time.” When they say first time, they are referring to one of the characters sweetie, who is having sex for the “first time”, not the writer’s first story. You said the girl (you?) had sex with her boyfriend in England, and the guy was fifty-nine. Probably not his first time. Right? You wrote this in the middle of April. Why haven’t you written more. You had ten good comments, and the story has been viewed almost 27,000 times with a 5.9/10. Try another one. Write me if y |