| 2008-04-02 22:48:50 |
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OKAY, so there is no fucking, sue me! I meant the story to end like this, but thanks for your opinions anyhow. |
| 2008-04-02 23:40:28 |
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actually I am glad there was no intercourse, I feel it was right in this case! |
| 2008-04-04 09:23:43 |
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Dont listen to the people who shoot you down for the lack of actual intercourse in this story. It is well written and quite erotic in it's own nature. I liked it. 8/10 |
| 2008-04-07 21:20:06 |
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i liked it |
| 2008-04-08 22:51:10 |
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you should put more of a story anxd not just all sex. But the sex was good 8/10 |