| 2008-04-05 19:56:13 |
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Crap, sorry about that! I need to get better at editing my work. The real problem is this site won't let me get back in to fix it.
Jmt |
| 2008-04-05 20:00:52 |
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fuck mate it was a bit confusing but ha i knew what you ment.
you are a good writer keep them coming.
10/10 do you knock up amber & beth?? |
| 2008-04-05 21:35:23 |
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Good story. In sequels, get all 4 women pregnut. |
| 2008-04-05 23:38:35 |
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damn you're a really awesome writer.
10/10 |
| 2008-04-06 00:06:43 |
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it was soRt of funny at times!
10/10 |