| 2008-04-20 09:30:49 |
Date with my sister
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I'm a little confused. Was this just a fantasy in the story? Was it a daydream? Or is this what actually happened in the story? Decent anyway, but too short. Please add some eroticism. 5/10. |
| 2008-04-20 18:20:22 |
Date with my sister
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I'm confused too!! |
| 2008-04-20 22:53:11 |
Date with my sister
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the tasting hs own cum and it being the best thing he has ever tasted was just gr0ss but the rest was good |
| 2008-04-21 09:06:39 |
Date with my sister
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this story has potential, it wasn't great but u should expand, make what u have more clear, and continue the story. |
| 2008-04-20 12:24:20 |
Maeghan Wrist: C06
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cant wait till 7 comes out |